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Moments of Challenge ! Section Task : Go ! Describing a moment of challenge Write your own story about a moment of challenge in sport . The story can be about you , someone you know , or a sports personality . 1 . Write about a sport that you know . 2 . Choose an experience that has a "point" to it . The experience may have been rewarding , difficult or disappointing . 3 . Use the star diagram on page 12 to help you organize your story . 4 . If you like . add words or expressions from "Personal Challenges" on pages 10-11 to your own story . 5 . Read your first draft and make sure that the story answers the questions from the star diagram : What ? Where ? Who ? How ? and Why ? 6 . Review the draft with a partner . Then correct the draft and read it again . 7 . Check your spelling with a dictionary or a spell checker and make your final corrections . 8 . Submit the final copy of your story to the teacher , together with your first draft ( s ) . Your teacher will assess your work on the Student Assessment Pane The following checklist shows what you should have in your completed task . Task Elements Presenting the Facts ? The story answers the five questions in the star diagram : What ? Where ? Who ? How ? Why ? ? The events follow logically . Getting Across the Feeling of the Moment ? The words used help the reader understand : the moment of challenge ; the point of the story ; how the main character felt in the story . ? The story reads like a real experience . Using Feedback from a Partner ? The final draft shows changes and improvement compared to the first draft ( s ) . Language ? The final draft shows accurate use of grammar . ? The final draft shows accurate use of spelling .
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